Thursday, 30 January 2014

Poets United

without you
this hole will never be filled

i know that i must go on
without you

without you
i will survive somehow

i will never be complete
without you

5 comments:

  1. Whew, that is the hunger one feels from WAY deep & nothing else will take it away!

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  2. That is one deep longing. I can relate to this one. ;)

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  3. Beautifully composed..you have highlighted the real pain of loss..perhaps the worst of it being at times to go on

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  4. simple words conveying a gnawing pain. Well expressed.

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  5. a few words that leave you with a sense of loss and pain... well done...

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