Wednesday, 22 January 2014

Girls Just Want To Have Fun

POETS UNITED






there they were
leaping lithe baroque goddesses
covered in lapis lazulis and topaz coins
a kindly throng of aging cinderellas
some fluttering scales on flutes
providing tone and lyricism to the ebb and flow
of the event




they danced like swans on the water
at midnight by moon haze
a little pedantic perhaps
resembling an isadora duncan parody/ joke
giving rise to illusory fame in reverie





it was an opportunity  for them to leave
their brushes and pans on the shelf
jump out of the humdrum closet
escape the suffocating  underground life and breathe

they threw kindling on to the roaring fire
chanting burn burn burn
signalling a charged  electricity of anticipation
words could not express their excitement
and for a short time they escaped



their fractured dismal lives of servitude


 



7 comments:

  1. Nothing is so liberating as a good romp with the nymphs !!!

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    1. Ah - so you have been indulging in a bit of Isadora Duncaning I see !

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  2. Enjoyed this. Everyone needs a break from drudgery, and these girls seemed to know just how to find it!

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  3. Oh do I love this series of photos - the first rather staid, the second sheer joy and abandon, the third, sadly, back at the domestic bucket. LOVE "a kindly throng of aging cinderellas" and the dancing like swans!!!!!!

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  4. cinder Ellas for the modern age ~

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  5. I love the way you portrayed the other side of life. An escape indeed!

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  6. Amazing - not only the poem itself but the images you interspersed in between the stanzas. A rich, vivid description. One wonders if they ever did escape their servitude for good.

    -Nicole

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