Sunday, 27 January 2013

Tanka..Sunday Scribblings


we've got the message
have you heard that less is more
dangerous for swimming
meeting your maker may be
sooner than you want or think
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10 comments:

  1. Altonian27 January 2013 at 07:57

    He's made his point, I would say!

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  2. Josie Two Shoes27 January 2013 at 08:06

    Very clever poem, I suspect that his bulky necklace will function well as an anchor! We can definitely cite this as overkill :-)

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  3. Berowne27 January 2013 at 11:24

    Whimsically wry...

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  4. Sharp Little Pencil27 January 2013 at 22:24

    Loved it! Man, his name is Legion, isn't it?

    I wore my bikini when I was pregnant, and about 7 months into it, I was approached by "this guy" on the beach. He berated me for showing my belly. "MY belly is full of life. Yours is full of beer and an unhealthy liver. Who should really cover up?" (crickets) ha ha Amy

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  5. Cressida de Nova28 January 2013 at 01:37

    Was the 7 month pregnant bikini clad person wearing similar bling?:)

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  6. Brian Miller29 January 2013 at 19:45

    hope that doesnt weigh him down like an anchor....errr look away, look away....smiles.

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