Thursday, 7 June 2012

Rolling Stone

leaving again
a rolling stone
wandering
interplanetary
a black spot
on the sun
swimming the milky way
roots ripped up
one place to another
always looking
always looking
never finding

8 comments:

  1. you capture a certain restlessness..the traveling between the worlds..inwards and outwards..the rolling stone...nice..

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  2. always looking
    never finding

    this is the echo of the rambling...always moving on somewhere else...nice play on the venus cross

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  3. Venus in transit has inspired so many of us lately. I'm glad you use it as a metaphor here for love that is always seeking fulfillment, always in search of its end.

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  4. "roots ripped up
    one place to another
    always looking
    always looking
    never fnding"

    Well this sounds familiar.

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  5. Love that seeks fulfillment will struggle to settle. Love has no end to search for. It just is.

    Love of self means wandering is a peaceful stroll. Admiring the scenery until a spot to settle is serendipitously stumbled upon.

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  6. Simple and effective use of the prompt, really nice, enjoyed it!

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  7. Does anyone else ever howl at a full moon; or is it just me? It can feel very liberating!

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