well i was thinking the end of life....but still in the maze to get so close yet be so far away can be pretty disheartening...
Point well made!!
Wonderful metaphor... when I was little I used to have a book of mazes I had drawn. Loved doing that.
The syllables are perfect and the "sh" is shared in line 1 # 3 are very. But the rhyme, alas! Or did I miss something? Loved the Maze stuff. Like Brian, I though it was end of life of a suicide that failed.
Helas no rhyme and no excuses.And no..not a poem about suicide either ...
Ha! This has a wonderful abruptness - the almost-there-ness of the maze! k.
well i was thinking the end of life....but still in the maze to get so close yet be so far away can be pretty disheartening...
ReplyDeletePoint well made!!
ReplyDeleteWonderful metaphor... when I was little I used to have a book of mazes I had drawn. Loved doing that.
ReplyDeleteThe syllables are perfect and the "sh" is shared in line 1 # 3 are very. But the rhyme, alas! Or did I miss something? Loved the Maze stuff. Like Brian, I though it was end of life of a suicide that failed.
ReplyDeleteHelas no rhyme and no excuses.
DeleteAnd no..not a poem about suicide either ...
Ha! This has a wonderful abruptness - the almost-there-ness of the maze! k.
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