an electrical charged
thunder bolt
struck right through
the centre into collaps'd
stupendous magnificent
division
PITY
She
came too late
had the wrong culture
had the wrong religion
had been married before
had the wrong profession
did not like domesticity
did not tolerate servility
was too opinionated
was too intense
was too emotional
was too demanding
wasted time writing poetry
rather than earning dollars
He
who was perfect
was also an accountant
Ha. interesting 'love story' here. LOL
ReplyDeletethe structure is uniquely delightful.
the bolt, then the PITY. next, 'she' then 'he'
your reader (me) likes this play on structure.
her traits against his one.
funny and fun and great. Love it.
thank you.
love your blog,
ReplyDeletecome join our poetry picnic week 9 today,
first time participants can share 1 to 3 random poems.
Old poems or poems unrelated to our theme are welcome.
Hope to see you in.
Best!
xoxox