Friday, 9 March 2012

Triolet





Triolet, good name for a boat
Mrs Danvers whispers strange words
To Rebecca swimming afloat
Triolet,good name for a boat

Manderley,eerie and remote
A haven for storm struck sea birds
Triolet, good name for a boat
Mrs Danvers whispers strange words

4 comments:

  1. A triolet with a whispered intimation of tragedy. Well done.

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  2. interesting, nice conveyance of story in your triolet

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  3. What a boat that might be, slim, aeordynamic, racing across the waves at 200 mph. This is slim and trim too, fir to exploit speed of thought and sound.

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  4. I like your take on the triolet, well done!

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