Saturday, 2 November 2013

Back To Black


dverse

storm clouds
back to black

waiting
for a ray
of white light

to pierce
dark ink thoughts

rumbling and roaring
across the plains
of vivid verdigris reality

9 comments:

  1. after the dark always comes light...though at times it feels like the light will never come...

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  2. Nice! The imagery is perfect! :-)

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  3. Beautiful message of hope & light to chase away the darkness~

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  4. stark illumination against the tarnish of life ? How precious it is. Powerful last stanza.

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  5. Beautiful... the palette of the dark hues, blinded by a single beam of white light. Well portrayed. :-) My favorite phrase would be- "of vivid verdigirs reality".
    -HA

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  6. ugh yes... sometimes in those black cloud times we wonder if a light ray ever manages to pierce through...but they're powerful - and will...smiles

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  7. light can be such a fragile thing when dark clouds roll across the sky...

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  8. The light in your soul will see you through. It has before; it will again. I will light a candle for you and hope its rays reach you.

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