Saturday, 18 August 2012

Sun Flars



her soft petals wilt
in the harsh afternoon heat
she dreams of rain drops

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  1. Ha. Very very nice! k.

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  2. Beautiful. This well describes seasons of turmoil in a person's life---the way we wilt and long for rain when we are under pressure or exposed to extreme "heat," spiritual, emotional, occupational, etc.

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    1. Nice responses to my poetry are raindrops to my wilt:)

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  3. nice...reminds me of those sunflower fields i've seen in tuscany..but even their wilting has something incredibly beautiful

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  4. I am sure so many living things of raindrops in the heat of summer, while Winter logged others (moi) dream of sunshine! Lovely!

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  5. it is raining here right now....it is def a relief....this has been such a brutal summer for so many...

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    1. raindrops keep falling on my head
      doo doo doo dada

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  6. I think there's a message in all this dry, hot weather.....

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    1. Agreed..humans by their greed and insensitivity are destroying the planet.

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  7. One of the most extraordinary facets of humanity is their ability to humanize the natural world around them. I think it is a gift making one more a part of the world that above it. Great haiku.

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